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Event Horizon

Lizzie Offline

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01-15-2017, 01:56 AM

Tiger,

I agree that this one is beautiful. There's true heartache in it.

My favorite bit is "I loved you brightly." I usually dislike adverbs, but this one is perfect.

Well done. Big Grin

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Event Horizon - by Tiger the Lion - 01-10-2017, 03:29 PM

RE: Event Horizon - by Magpie - 01-13-2017, 04:43 AM

RE: Event Horizon - by Lizzie - 01-15-2017, 01:56 AM

RE: Event Horizon - by Alexearth - 01-28-2017, 12:48 AM

RE: Event Horizon - by RiverNotch - 01-28-2017, 10:15 PM

RE: Event Horizon - by Tiger the Lion - 02-08-2017, 05:36 PM

RE: Event Horizon - by Magpie - 02-09-2017, 12:40 AM

RE: Event Horizon - by laltieri0 - 02-11-2017, 12:38 AM

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