THREATS
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I had a good laugh reading this poem. I agree with @HopeVitctoria56's 2nd point though.

If you hadn't specified that it was a humorous dad poem the first few lines would be quite vague. Not necissarily negative though. I guess it would all make sense at the last sentence.

Thanks for posting @hesawacko
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THREATS - by hesawacko - 01-10-2017, 07:23 AM
RE: THREATS - by CRNDLSM - 01-10-2017, 07:33 AM
RE: THREATS - by HopeVictoria56 - 01-10-2017, 11:33 AM
RE: THREATS - by ThatOneGuy - 01-13-2017, 10:38 AM
RE: THREATS - by jrgxng - 01-13-2017, 01:22 PM
RE: THREATS - by Rogo - 01-14-2017, 09:49 AM
RE: THREATS - by voodoochild - 01-17-2017, 08:53 AM
RE: THREATS - by JasonM. - 01-22-2017, 07:17 AM
RE: THREATS - by hesawacko - 04-11-2017, 02:37 AM
RE: THREATS - by burrealist - 04-11-2017, 02:57 AM
RE: THREATS - by nibbed - 04-11-2017, 03:58 AM
RE: THREATS - by 18sawe - 04-13-2017, 09:36 PM
RE: THREATS - by headybeach - 04-24-2017, 01:27 AM
RE: THREATS - by Szczepan - 05-04-2017, 04:31 PM



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