01-13-2017, 10:38 AM
I had a good laugh reading this poem. I agree with @HopeVitctoria56's 2nd point though.
If you hadn't specified that it was a humorous dad poem the first few lines would be quite vague. Not necissarily negative though. I guess it would all make sense at the last sentence.
Thanks for posting @hesawacko
If you hadn't specified that it was a humorous dad poem the first few lines would be quite vague. Not necissarily negative though. I guess it would all make sense at the last sentence.
Thanks for posting @hesawacko
