Event Horizon
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Hey Paul,

Didn't want to see this one disappear beyond the event horizon of the main page without saying that I like it — I really like it.

Not much else to say - I could say that perhaps the semicolon could be dropped because short poems such as this work better sometimes without any punctuation. But because this is miscellaneous then feel free to tell me where to go.  Thumbsup

Cheers,

Mark
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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Messages In This Thread
Event Horizon - by Tiger the Lion - 01-10-2017, 03:29 PM
RE: Event Horizon - by Magpie - 01-13-2017, 04:43 AM
RE: Event Horizon - by Lizzie - 01-15-2017, 01:56 AM
RE: Event Horizon - by Alexearth - 01-28-2017, 12:48 AM
RE: Event Horizon - by RiverNotch - 01-28-2017, 10:15 PM
RE: Event Horizon - by Tiger the Lion - 02-08-2017, 05:36 PM
RE: Event Horizon - by Magpie - 02-09-2017, 12:40 AM
RE: Event Horizon - by laltieri0 - 02-11-2017, 12:38 AM



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