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Later, still in love and a little drunk

kk311412
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12-21-2016, 09:17 AM

This is very powerful! However choosing more powerful language in the second stanza would add to it's substance. Very nicely written.

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Later, still in love and a little drunk - by just mercedes - 11-26-2016, 03:00 AM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by Leanne - 11-27-2016, 04:20 AM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by just mercedes - 11-27-2016, 05:38 AM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by Leanne - 11-27-2016, 05:42 AM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by just mercedes - 11-27-2016, 05:43 AM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by Leanne - 11-27-2016, 06:44 AM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by just mercedes - 11-27-2016, 11:23 AM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by Leanne - 11-27-2016, 12:38 PM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by RiverNotch - 12-19-2016, 01:16 PM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by Achebe - 12-19-2016, 02:02 PM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by just mercedes - 12-20-2016, 01:44 PM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by Sparkydashforth - 12-20-2016, 02:44 PM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by kk311412 - 12-21-2016, 09:17 AM

RE: Later, still in love and a little drunk - by just mercedes - 12-21-2016, 02:14 PM

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