Humanimantra (an experiment)

[Lizzie]

 using sexual energy for creation

This is an interesting concept.

Ha, I actually like the dick representation. It's kind of a modern thing to do and not seen in a lot of poetry. Made the piece stand out for me, and it seemed whimsical. Whether people love it or hate it, it's memorable.

But, what do I know.

I like that the humanity of the speaker shows in this piece.