Armistice Wind - Edit2

[dukealien]

Change in meter question...


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I guess my question is why the meter change?  I don't want to misinterpret your intentions, the edits you've made really enhanced the piece, but I think you mentioned it in a spoiler and I'm curious.

The meter's meant to reflect easy, secure expectations (this year's Armistice/Veterans'/Remembrance Day, same as the last) gradually turning disorderly if not chaotic as the history of what's being remembered intrudes and seems ubiquitous, then returning to more serene reality.  That's all - blank verse getting a little rowdy.

Thanks for the read!