12-03-2016, 05:19 PM
Sparky: I will cut the offending refrain, no problem. Thank you for letting me know it's not working. 
I do wish to refer to people as the planets because of this article.
Deathstar: Maybe I need to cut that headlight stanza -- I wasn't sure if it fit or not. Or maybe just tone it down like you said. I'll think on it.
The doors crack open for a minute, not like the wide open doors of summer.
I think it probably does sound like some arguments for God's existence, but I'm arguing for the existence of people. The lamplight can be the sun, that's fine -- I don't see why it can't be. I hover around my light sources in the dark winter. I don't have to have all of my q's dotted.
The idea is that I know something of people from their effects on other things, not because I see them directly.
I do wish to refer to people as the planets because of this article.Deathstar: Maybe I need to cut that headlight stanza -- I wasn't sure if it fit or not. Or maybe just tone it down like you said. I'll think on it.
The doors crack open for a minute, not like the wide open doors of summer.
I think it probably does sound like some arguments for God's existence, but I'm arguing for the existence of people. The lamplight can be the sun, that's fine -- I don't see why it can't be. I hover around my light sources in the dark winter. I don't have to have all of my q's dotted.
The idea is that I know something of people from their effects on other things, not because I see them directly.