Hermetic November

[Sparkydashforth]

Enjoyed mucho Lizziep -

It's the season of walls, firm
as universal laws, with the perforation
of doors opening briefly like portals. ...............Strong start. I would change "its the season" to - A season.
Like how it sets the isolation scenario.

It's the season of windows—a candle ..............would cut the refrain of "its the season".
in the windowsill signals
that something sentient still lives inside. .............more disconnected imagery - good.

Headlights, strange and sharp in the dark,
bore into the hulk of morning,
battling through its murky black. .............good extended image.

There's curtain-cloaked lamplight glowing
through windows and frosty cars in driveways,
but people are planets of distant stars:...................maybe just 'distant stars'?

probabilities—inferences
from the way the light bends around them,
how it warps and curves....................................yes interesting ponderings

It's reasonable to deduce
that the movement of cars cannot be random,
that the lamplight returns bearing promise and purpose. .............YES.