First Posted Poem by Me
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Like this loads.


[quote='stampede331' pid='215354' dateline='1472249277']



Born from a time machine
A room
Buzzes, beeps .......................I read this as both hospital equipment, and the 'whole time'-machine of life itself.
 
My heart flits
Almost 9 months
Warmth, milk, sleep..........................most excellent encapsulation.
 
Formula it is
A crib
Stable, bars.....................not sure how relevant the stanza is
 
So much time to catch up on
Then to now
Is how much time?.........................super muse.
 
A lifetime times a thousand
To get here
The year 1984..........................is the date important to you, does it need to be stated?
                                              Literary reference?  If not I would cut the line.
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Messages In This Thread
First Posted Poem by Me - by stampede331 - 08-27-2016, 07:07 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by next - 08-27-2016, 02:29 PM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by CRNDLSM - 08-30-2016, 03:41 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by Vanity - 08-30-2016, 08:13 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by stampede331 - 09-06-2016, 01:39 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by rowens - 09-06-2016, 03:46 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by Shrewbe - 10-05-2016, 03:17 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by Reflection - 10-09-2016, 03:27 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by Sparkydashforth - 12-02-2016, 04:16 AM



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