First Posted Poem by Me

[Sparkydashforth]

Like this loads.


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Born from a time machine
A room
Buzzes, beeps .......................I read this as both hospital equipment, and the 'whole time'-machine of life itself.
 
My heart flits
Almost 9 months
Warmth, milk, sleep..........................most excellent encapsulation.
 
Formula it is
A crib
Stable, bars.....................not sure how relevant the stanza is
 
So much time to catch up on
Then to now
Is how much time?.........................super muse.
 
A lifetime times a thousand
To get here
The year 1984..........................is the date important to you, does it need to be stated?
                                              Literary reference?  If not I would cut the line.