Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make
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that whole rabbits thing -- dark and clear should be dark yet clear. changing means the passage of authority, that times are changing, that the speaker is changing. the world is orange -- oranges should here be treated as symbols of death. prayer is always important, in this saga -- remember that everything ends as the speaker's child imitates the death of Christ. and rabbits in the meadow is innocence, perhaps chiefly demonstrated by all the children in the saga. ie (or qed) that surreal poem isn't surreal at all -- it's, very clearly (the key, really, is orange, which is just way too specific to have been just lumped in there) a poem on The Godfather. xD
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RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by just mercedes - 12-03-2014, 03:49 PM
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