Corridor [edit]

[dukealien]

The edit definitely illustrated the tale and moral more clearly, but in some ways it lost the adventurous spirit of discovering the feeling at the end.  I think the parentheses in the original helped in interpreting that remarkable feeling of.  like you winked at the reader saying, 'I guess you just had to be there'

Hmmm... how to summarize without summarizing.  It's quite a three-pipe problem (definition 8 - pipe: barrel of ale )

Thanks!  More work needed.