11-15-2016, 08:04 AM
As the author of the poem, and it seems the author of the book by the end revelation, I don't like how you refer to the book as intriguing in the first stanza. It is intriguing but you don't have to say that, say something we don't know about it if you need an adjective. Because God exists by Carl jung is not in itself intriguing either, except by the end revelation of Frankenstein book-monster. Other than the one adjective, I think this is brilliant. I don't know if it's an excerpt from a biography or just the rambling of a lunatic. And I like it.
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