Song of the Great Mother
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(11-02-2016, 03:24 PM)billy Wrote:  oops i thought attis was greek

you know that sound someone has when they use twice as many words as needed and they're generally filler words of four or less letters?

me off my
as if your
It is the [twice]
It is a
and not of
and so the

there are more and even more if 5 letter words are counted. it's no biggy, just saying it if it's intentional they no harm
It's as intentional as my lack of skill allows it to be, xD. I do wonder how peeps squeeze out that stuff when playing with meter, especially iambic --- rather, I do wonder when or how I'll have read enough to reach that point. Thanks for the stuff!

Attis is technically Phrygian, but that's Greek enough for me.
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Messages In This Thread
Song of the Great Mother - by RiverNotch - 11-01-2016, 02:35 PM
RE: Song of the Great Mother - by billy - 11-01-2016, 03:45 PM
RE: Song of the Great Mother - by RiverNotch - 11-02-2016, 01:47 PM
RE: Song of the Great Mother - by billy - 11-02-2016, 03:24 PM
RE: Song of the Great Mother - by RiverNotch - 11-02-2016, 11:11 PM



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