10-12-2016, 12:18 PM
(10-11-2016, 10:04 PM)kolemath Wrote:Well, he did use braggadocious -- er...(10-11-2016, 12:46 PM)Brownlie Wrote: Ouch the little bastard moved on me. Here, the voice shifts. These words are too advanced for the fool. Maybe put them in italics and disassociate the fool from an omniscient narrator. This is more commentary than a fool's comment.
Tied his tiny, metronomic heart
to a worthless, backbone-like sword.
And I just said so, ella, because so far whenever he was steered Hitler's way he went and turned his course -- but perhaps you're right. In which case, please be wrong.
And maybe someone will write about Clinton, but I'm sure the time's not now, duke --- too many people forget to choose the (far) lesser evil.