10-09-2016, 03:27 AM
Your first line puzzle me as I don't see a woman pregnancy as a form of time machine, for me the idea of a time machine is something that transport from one time to another time without ageing and travel time is seconds or less, but every other line and as you say yourself, is about the process of birth and may I add growing up, so for me the word "machine" is the cause for my confusion so maybe "Born from time travel" which is a journey from the start of pregnancy then birth and living life, that way then you're leaving out thoughts of the meaning of the word "machine" or maybe its just me
Also I suppose memories would be a form of an inner time machine but then no one remember nine months and then birth but in saying all that I really do like your poem, it has put me through some serious thinking which I have enjoy, thank you
Also I suppose memories would be a form of an inner time machine but then no one remember nine months and then birth but in saying all that I really do like your poem, it has put me through some serious thinking which I have enjoy, thank you

