10-08-2016, 11:09 AM
The inclusion of R&J is to give it some grounding, and refers to the premier performance in Shakespéare's time. Brow, for me, includes the mind.
If he became a godly apparition after his death there must have been some reason for it while he was alive., and that's what I was going with. The rhyme is veiled yes even while it's glissading, as musically a piece descends.
and yes, the final stanza uses some archaisms intentionally. RC
If he became a godly apparition after his death there must have been some reason for it while he was alive., and that's what I was going with. The rhyme is veiled yes even while it's glissading, as musically a piece descends.
and yes, the final stanza uses some archaisms intentionally. RC