'Thanks' 'You're Welcome' edit 1 a little closer

[CRNDLSM]

This is the intro and outro of a larger work that's supposed to follow the 5 stages of grief.  I think the 'Thanks' is fine.  'You're Welcome' was originally just called 'You've Got Her Back'  but I was thinking of the greater scheme...  which seems like more cliches.  Please tear it apart, thank you!

Thanks


I know this, These two lines not needed  symmetry
that is,

You don't come around here
like you need something from me that I can't give.
No, you don't come around at all. Delete No  no

For that, for what?   I'm bitter about being alone, simultaneously expecting what can't be given from company.
I appreciate that.        a sarcastic thanks, it is my problem.



You're Welcome


When she was overwhelmed,
you sent me away,
and gave him a sign. she  you, him confusing   absolutely right, I don't know what I'm saying

He gave me his word
that you've got her back.
You've got her back... why the repeat?   i guess I'm just repeating it to myself, to wrap my head around it.

I'm out in the mud,
the blood's still in my arms, what blood?  The only reason blood would not be in the arms is if it was 'let out?'   I want to say I'm over it but not over it, like the five stages are not an ending but a cycle
but you've got her back.

You need to develop this more because it has too many gaps and inconsistencies  thank you for the help here, I am trying to develop it, and your perspective helps.  Thank you!