Stacks

[rayheinrich]

Alright folks, a second edit is here; deffo not the finished product yet but some changes made, glad to hear any more comments it brings.
Not sure why it's all in bold though, can't seem to get it to look normal. I must be an old person who has forgotten how to make the internet do what I want.

Code:

Change this line at the first:
[b][color=#333333][size=small][font=Monaco, Consolas, Courier, monospace][pre verse][/font][/size][/color]Stacks[/b]
to this:
[pre verse] [b]Stacks[/b]
and the bold problem will go away

I like the changes.

But (in both versions) that last line bothers me:

[ and steadies my undreamed sadness from blowing free ]

Ending it on:

it goes down easy.

seems much better to me.