09-25-2016, 06:19 AM
It read like someone not wanting to leave the comfort of their armchair, how long "so I've got all the time in the world to miss you" your words follow that way which in writing is really good.
"Only six more months of Fall" but you start with "Here there are two months of Summer"
Reads to me like a break down piece of poetry, really enjoy reading your used of words.
"Only six more months of Fall" but you start with "Here there are two months of Summer"
Reads to me like a break down piece of poetry, really enjoy reading your used of words.