09-13-2016, 03:08 AM
I think the first 3 stanzas are begging for a little punctuation. Some periods planted throughout the poem would work wonders for the overall flow. I love the content, however, and feel like everyone has struggled with trying to get something "off their heart" that they wish wasn't there. I agree with Lizzie though! Can we fix the font size? Keep writing, 89! You have something good going here!
-DJesters
-DJesters