09-06-2016, 05:47 AM
First let me say , you have the dubious honor of being my first critique. Let me also say I'm an AMERICAN, I live in AMERICA , please don't hold this against me. I'm here because, I needed a different perspective on PROSE... ok , RE: No Cope to Hope...this is good...if it were a resume , I feel your....describing yourself... It leaves me wanting..., for more , your just scratching the surface..., deeper , deeper. Say what you don't want to say , then say it again , that being said...your kind of talking about me , thank you , good read...jd
