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Two Seasons
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Andy Kaufman
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09-01-2016, 08:50 AM
You could drop the lines directly referencing missing someone, reworking the other details and images with more subtle implications. I like the leaves dropping in the hall and the kitchen. . . . Right now it's a hybrid, partly a poem and mostly you breaking in talking.
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Two Seasons - by HopeVictoria56 - 09-01-2016, 08:36 AM
RE: Two Seasons - by rowens - 09-01-2016, 08:50 AM
RE: Two Seasons - by cvanshelton - 09-01-2016, 12:57 PM
RE: Two Seasons - by Achebe - 09-02-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Two Seasons - by D.MYST - 09-02-2016, 04:39 PM
RE: Two Seasons - by treykolb - 09-11-2016, 04:31 PM
RE: Two Seasons - by Mr. Deadpool - 09-21-2016, 07:16 PM
RE: Two Seasons - by TSPKNIP - 09-22-2016, 05:51 AM
RE: Two Seasons - by HaleINthewind - 09-22-2016, 01:10 PM
RE: Two Seasons - by CRNDLSM - 09-23-2016, 09:26 AM
RE: Two Seasons - by Reflection - 09-25-2016, 06:19 AM
RE: Two Seasons - by EarthwareVessel - 09-25-2016, 10:42 AM



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