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No Cope to Hope

No Cope to Hope
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08-31-2016, 01:31 PM
The lines seem only connected in a rhyming logic. If it rhymes it must make sense and be legitimate. Like it was made to happen just like that. That's the main flaw of the poem. The good rhyme feeling, it's not always as good as it seems.
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No Cope to Hope - by djNasty - 08-31-2016, 11:36 AM
RE: No Cope to Hope - by rowens - 08-31-2016, 01:31 PM
RE: No Cope to Hope - by cvanshelton - 09-01-2016, 02:26 AM
RE: No Cope to Hope - by HopeVictoria56 - 09-01-2016, 04:27 AM
RE: No Cope to Hope - by maximuswolf - 09-01-2016, 09:20 AM
RE: No Cope to Hope - by j.l.dean - 09-06-2016, 05:47 AM
RE: No Cope to Hope - by operadiva - 09-11-2016, 08:40 AM
RE: No Cope to Hope - by 89layers - 09-13-2016, 02:08 AM
RE: No Cope to Hope - by 3zu - 09-14-2016, 04:35 AM
RE: No Cope to Hope - by FilthyDeluxe - 09-25-2016, 11:36 PM



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