First Posted Poem by Me
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(08-27-2016, 07:07 AM)stampede331 Wrote:  Born from a time machine
A room
Buzzes, beeps
 
My heart flits
Almost 9 months
Warmth, milk, sleep
 
Formula it is
A crib
Stable, bars
 
So much time to catch up on
Then to now
Is how much time?
 
A lifetime times a thousand
To get here
The year 1984
I like how your first poem is also a poem about being born. It's cute. Were you actually born in 1984? Because I know next said it was cliched, but I mean if it's really when you were born, you can't help that. Unless it's a literary reference, in which case I apologize for it being lost on me, having never read the book. It kind of reminds me of...of Kal-El being transported from Krypton to Earth in that little pod traveling through space and time.
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First Posted Poem by Me - by stampede331 - 08-27-2016, 07:07 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by next - 08-27-2016, 02:29 PM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by SnarlingThroughOurSmiles - 08-29-2016, 12:17 PM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by CRNDLSM - 08-30-2016, 03:41 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by Vanity - 08-30-2016, 08:13 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by stampede331 - 09-06-2016, 01:39 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by rowens - 09-06-2016, 03:46 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by Shrewbe - 10-05-2016, 03:17 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by Reflection - 10-09-2016, 03:27 AM
RE: First Posted Poem by Me - by Sparkydashforth - 12-02-2016, 04:16 AM



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