08-27-2016, 02:41 AM
"The hot winds of anger
blow across the frigid landscape.
Leaving only a desert
where flowers once grew"
This part doesn't really make sense because "the hot winds of anger" are supposed to destroy the flower which "once grew." The landscape is "frigid," though, which indicates death or barrenness or a tundra of some sort. If anything, "the hot winds of anger" would cause the soil to warm and the flowers to grow.
blow across the frigid landscape.
Leaving only a desert
where flowers once grew"
This part doesn't really make sense because "the hot winds of anger" are supposed to destroy the flower which "once grew." The landscape is "frigid," though, which indicates death or barrenness or a tundra of some sort. If anything, "the hot winds of anger" would cause the soil to warm and the flowers to grow.