08-10-2016, 03:17 AM
(08-05-2016, 01:52 PM)sapril Wrote: Hello Kieth,Thank you for the comments sapril very much appreciated . Keith
to me this reads like a portrait. It's dark tones and shadow corners where you put your emerging man felt very relieving to read. I liked it mostly because you kept out judgement and that, to me, made it honest.
well done.
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