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[Leanne]

This is a beautifully vivid picture. The blatantly-stated colour is something I would normally dislike, but you have a fine touch and the bookending of the red sports car/ rowan berries is perfect. I really enjoy the little stitches that hold this together: car bonnet to oily mechanic's rag, oily "capillaries" to "veins and arteries" of the tree's branches.

I wonder if there shouldn't be a hyphen in grey-laced?

Very much enjoyed this, thanks!