07-30-2016, 10:40 PM
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Hey we are all Newbies! Please feel free to comment a lot.
With the last stanza, the figurine goes back in the dark cuckoo box of the cuckoo clock (if you've seen one) which is entirely dark and you can't see what color her dress is either. So she goes back in the dark cuckoo box on automatic like clockwork, scraped "the foot" (feeling resigned of her wooden nature) on her way in. If that makes more sense.
I will post a revision on Monday because I have an open house at my dad's place tomorrow so I'll be the kitchen's help the whole day.
< Hey we are all Newbies! Please feel free to comment a lot.
With the last stanza, the figurine goes back in the dark cuckoo box of the cuckoo clock (if you've seen one) which is entirely dark and you can't see what color her dress is either. So she goes back in the dark cuckoo box on automatic like clockwork, scraped "the foot" (feeling resigned of her wooden nature) on her way in. If that makes more sense.
I will post a revision on Monday because I have an open house at my dad's place tomorrow so I'll be the kitchen's help the whole day.