Poems that can't be made better by using more than three words
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You need to explain to the words the benefit of having a title. For example, the poems of yore that had no titles just used the first line as a title, which means the first word in your case. Would the other two words be ok with one of the words having the elevated position of title word? That would be the equivalent to erecting a statue in its honor. Unless it is hands down the best word, you're going to have dissension and petty jealousy. For the sake of peace and unity I strongly reccomend a title. This is how you can argue the case to them, then once they agree you can cram as many words as possible into the title .. And they won't be able to object because they already agreed. Also, the suspense is killing me. Are you planning to let us actually read the poem???? Is there any plea we can make to the words to convince them to let you share them with us?????
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara 
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RE: Poems that can't be made better by using more than three words - by Quixilated - 07-27-2016, 11:19 PM



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