From Youth to Youth(Edit 1)

From Youth to Youth(Edit 1)

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Sir Slant

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07-27-2016, 09:51 AM

Wipmp,
Thank you for the feedback, I will work on connecting the poem so its a bit more cohesive,
mike

Erthona,
Thanks for the feedback, I'll definitely be working on this one, your comments are much appreciated,
mike

Crit away

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From Youth to Youth(Edit 1) - by Weeded - 07-26-2016, 11:54 AM

RE: From Youth to Youth - by wipmp - 07-26-2016, 12:51 PM

RE: From Youth to Youth - by Erthona - 07-26-2016, 01:31 PM

RE: From Youth to Youth - by Weeded - 07-27-2016, 09:51 AM

RE: From Youth to Youth(Edit 1) - by wipmp - 07-27-2016, 10:34 PM

RE: From Youth to Youth(Edit 1) - by RiverNotch - 07-28-2016, 12:27 AM

RE: From Youth to Youth(Edit 1) - by Weeded - 07-30-2016, 05:18 PM

RE: From Youth to Youth(Edit 1) - by Lizzie - 07-30-2016, 06:45 PM

RE: From Youth to Youth(Edit 1) - by Weeded - 08-02-2016, 06:23 AM

RE: From Youth to Youth(Edit 1) - by Lizzie - 08-02-2016, 03:15 PM

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