Whats good I've had
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Well bugger me, it's a ghazal! Each couplet is self-contained, with a neat little radif, and you've got your name worked into the last line very cleverly. Plus, who doesn't love some slammin' guitar riffs? Nicely done, Keith.
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Whats good I've had - by Keith - 07-25-2016, 08:45 AM
RE: Whats good I've had - by just mercedes - 07-25-2016, 09:16 AM
RE: Whats good I've had - by Keith - 07-26-2016, 08:24 AM
RE: Whats good I've had - by Leanne - 07-25-2016, 09:18 AM
RE: Whats good I've had - by billy - 07-25-2016, 11:20 AM
RE: Whats good I've had - by Lizzie - 07-25-2016, 01:58 PM
RE: Whats good I've had - by billy - 07-25-2016, 02:00 PM
RE: Whats good I've had - by Lizzie - 07-26-2016, 01:27 AM
RE: Whats good I've had - by Achebe - 07-25-2016, 06:11 PM



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