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#8

07-08-2016, 07:31 AM

New version is up. It's not "done," just working in that direction.

Thanks again to everybody that responded. Big Grin

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I've incorporated lots of your fine critique. Still thinking about the ending.

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Four Years Old - by Lizzie - 06-20-2016, 04:23 PM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Magpie - 06-20-2016, 08:06 PM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Lizzie - 06-21-2016, 03:37 PM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Todd - 06-20-2016, 10:48 PM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by dukealien - 06-21-2016, 01:33 AM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Vanity - 08-30-2016, 07:38 AM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Lizzie - 08-30-2016, 12:10 PM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by kolemath - 06-21-2016, 01:39 PM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by billy - 06-21-2016, 02:10 PM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Lizzie - 07-08-2016, 07:31 AM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by ellajam - 07-08-2016, 10:22 AM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by just mercedes - 07-08-2016, 10:48 AM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Lizzie - 08-14-2016, 06:32 PM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Erthona - 08-15-2016, 05:10 AM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Achebe - 08-27-2016, 07:15 PM

RE: Four Years Old -- any level of critique welcome! - by Lizzie - 08-28-2016, 04:57 AM

RE: Four Years Old - by Lizzie - 03-25-2017, 06:41 AM

RE: Four Years Old - by CarrieChristo - 03-31-2017, 01:21 PM

RE: Four Years Old - by Lizzie - 04-03-2017, 05:46 AM

RE: Four Years Old - by Todd - 03-31-2017, 02:37 PM

RE: Four Years Old - by Lizzie - 04-03-2017, 07:09 AM

RE: Four Years Old - by CRNDLSM - 04-03-2017, 02:20 AM

RE: Four Years Old - by QDeathstar - 04-03-2017, 06:06 AM

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