Post Beat Modern (for milo)
#2
I'm always interested when I see a
poet breaking the
rules and
getting away with it.

Despite the funkiness of
the beat it
reads smooth like
butter—sexy butter—

so careful not to over-extend
—the erection metaphor—
by letting the ems do
their work.
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Post Beat Modern (for milo) - by Erthona - 06-22-2016, 02:35 AM
RE: Post Beat Modern (for milo) - by Lizzie - 06-24-2016, 03:27 PM
RE: Post Beat Modern (for milo) - by Erthona - 06-24-2016, 03:35 PM
RE: Post Beat Modern (for milo) - by LunaDeLore - 07-10-2016, 04:10 AM
RE: Post Beat Modern (for milo) - by billy - 07-10-2016, 09:12 AM
RE: Post Beat Modern (for milo) - by RiverNotch - 07-10-2016, 03:19 PM
RE: Post Beat Modern (for milo) - by Erthona - 07-12-2016, 06:17 AM
RE: Post Beat Modern (for milo) - by aschueler - 07-12-2016, 09:13 AM
RE: Post Beat Modern (for milo) - by Erthona - 07-13-2016, 09:41 AM



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