Four Years Old

[Lizzie]

I've read through the last stanza—in many ways the most poignant—many times and for the moment that is the part of the poem that I'll comment on.

Just now when I looked up 'inaccessible' in my dictionary one of the things it came up with was an eyrie or aerie—an eagle's nest

Thanks for going the extra mile -- much appreciated!

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Thanks so much for the help, guys! I couldn't be more grateful. It's wonderful to get useful critique and fresh ideas.

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