Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make

[DavidF]

Meaningless Poetry

Dark and clear,
Changing,
The world is orange--
I pray for the rabbits
In the meadow.

Hey that's a great poem all it needs is the right title and a light massage.....


 Hunger at Dawn/ Two Rounds Left

From dark to clear
changing
now the world is orange
I pray for rabbits
In the meadow.

D.