The Sentinel

The Sentinel

~~Caleb Murdock~~ Offline

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05-27-2016, 09:27 AM

Okay. It still sounded like you were making an interesting point -- sentinel is okay, but not sentinel of hope (that was as much as I could read). This poem isn't bad, in my view, and I'd like to scrub out the imperfections.

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The Sentinel - by Caleb Murdock - 05-15-2016, 02:37 PM

RE: The Sentinel - by Leanne - 05-16-2016, 04:44 AM

RE: The Sentinel - by Caleb Murdock - 05-16-2016, 06:16 AM

RE: The Sentinel - by Achebe - 05-25-2016, 10:17 PM

RE: The Sentinel - by Caleb Murdock - 05-26-2016, 04:20 AM

RE: The Sentinel - by Caleb Murdock - 05-27-2016, 09:10 AM

RE: The Sentinel - by Achebe - 05-27-2016, 09:12 AM

RE: The Sentinel - by Caleb Murdock - 05-27-2016, 09:27 AM

RE: The Sentinel - by tectak - 05-27-2016, 07:04 PM

RE: The Sentinel - by Caleb Murdock - 05-28-2016, 03:45 AM

RE: The Sentinel - by tectak - 05-28-2016, 02:55 PM

RE: The Sentinel - by Caleb Murdock - 05-28-2016, 03:09 PM

RE: The Sentinel - by jdvorak2 - 05-29-2016, 11:58 AM

RE: The Sentinel - by Caleb Murdock - 05-30-2016, 02:39 PM

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