04-30-2016, 08:50 AM
I like the feel to this. Homey but in a indie-movie edgy kind of way. It paints a nice picture but leaves me wanting more-- I picture it happening somewhere in rural Britain. Take me there, or to small town American or wherever it is you want it to be.
After Thursday I kept reading night.
Also the three names don't say a lot (to me anyway). They could do more work for you. As could the title.
Just thoughts.
-jc
After Thursday I kept reading night.
Also the three names don't say a lot (to me anyway). They could do more work for you. As could the title.
Just thoughts.
-jc
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.