Beside Myself
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I like the feel to this. Homey but in a indie-movie edgy kind of way. It paints a nice picture but leaves me wanting more-- I picture it happening somewhere in rural Britain. Take me there, or to small town American or wherever it is you want it to be.

After Thursday I kept reading night.

Also the three names don't say a lot (to me anyway). They could do more work for you. As could the title.

Just thoughts.

-jc
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Messages In This Thread
Beside Myself - by Wjames - 04-29-2016, 05:10 AM
RE: Beside Myself - by cidermaid - 04-29-2016, 04:19 PM
RE: Beside Myself - by justcloudy - 04-30-2016, 08:50 AM
RE: Beside Myself - by bedeep - 05-02-2016, 12:54 AM
RE: Beside Myself - by billy - 05-02-2016, 05:13 PM
RE: Beside Myself - by dukealien - 05-04-2016, 11:11 AM
RE: Beside Myself - by Wjames - 05-12-2016, 03:21 PM
RE: Beside Myself - by BecktheDog - 05-13-2016, 09:40 PM



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