04-25-2016, 03:37 PM
(04-25-2016, 09:11 AM)shaan Wrote: I, myself, is still a novice at poetry and can't really give any critics.You are doing yourself, and others, no favours by this seemingly contrived non-crit. Please contact me by PM if you are seriously interested in compliance. Your choice...tectak(mod)
But I like your poem and I find it poetic.

