Art Exam

[Keith]

Taking a break from reading NaPM.
Keith, whether a verse poem or a prose poem, it's a poem. The conclusion is beautiful. Don't know why I didn't see this earlier - maybe the title put me off. Perhaps 'scrawny necks' is more attention grabbing.

Hi Achebe
Yes I seem to write a lot of stuff like this and find it hard to make it sing, I guess its a trade off for the story. Thanks for taking the time to read and for the bump, best Keith