Amen

[tectak]

Amen

Let soft snow blanket my grave,Skirting dangerously close to cliche...we shall see.
Corruption hid by purityThis may be a uniquely stated line...
concealing soil and withered flowersas is this, though it is not clear in intent. This is probably a syntactical problem
marking my eternity.

Cry for yourself but not for me;Luke 23:28. Holy shit, a cliche of biblical proportions surely?
I do not weep nor do I fear.Gotami Sutta: Gotami - Access to Insight...almost plagiarism
There is no restlessness in death,Sadly, it is a well known state which directly contradicts you here.
no memories of life held dear.

Time for me is now the same
as the time before my birth.
As my flesh and bones decayGenesis 2:23. If you MUST use these poorly masked quotations you are well advised to add footnotes/credits
and I return to Mother Earth.Universal cliche.

I am sorry to say this, but regardless of your motivation for "writing" this piece, it is either knowingly or ignorantly (in a nice way) written by others. I cannot comment otherwise.
Best,
tectak