the end of an old life
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Good writing, the spacing of the lines aren't my type of thing but don't let words on a screen tell you what to do. This piece compels me to think of the end which is what I think it's intended for.
Love is evol.
Con is confidence.
Eros is sore.
Sin is sincere.
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the end of an old life - by faerykid - 03-10-2016, 02:45 PM
RE: the end of an old life - by ephemerald - 03-10-2016, 06:09 PM
RE: the end of an old life - by tectak - 03-11-2016, 04:21 PM
RE: the end of an old life - by Achebe - 03-12-2016, 03:52 PM
RE: the end of an old life - by Mr.Malicious - 03-27-2016, 01:57 PM
RE: the end of an old life - by 1skylande1 - 03-28-2016, 11:19 PM
RE: the end of an old life - by jmmc137 - 03-30-2016, 12:13 PM



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