Amen
#11
Thank you all, I'm pleased that you have considered my poem and made some very valid points. If I do an edit I shall definitely find most comments useful. Smile
PS the capital "c" that begins "corruption" was a simple typo.
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Amen - by Julius - 03-13-2016, 11:45 PM
RE: Amen - by DerTomatenToaster - 03-14-2016, 12:10 AM
RE: Amen - by Julius - 03-15-2016, 09:26 PM
RE: Amen - by DerTomatenToaster - 03-16-2016, 12:52 AM
RE: Amen - by Julius - 03-16-2016, 04:57 AM
RE: Amen - by Deckpoop - 03-15-2016, 05:23 AM
RE: Amen - by Achebe - 03-15-2016, 05:38 AM
RE: Amen - by DC Black - 03-16-2016, 06:56 PM
RE: Amen - by Sciencegeek - 03-23-2016, 06:38 AM
RE: Amen - by RiverNotch - 03-24-2016, 03:44 PM
RE: Amen - by Julius - 03-27-2016, 03:41 AM
RE: Amen - by Mr.Malicious - 03-29-2016, 05:05 PM
RE: Amen - by tectak - 03-29-2016, 06:16 PM



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