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(03-13-2016, 11:38 AM)ellajam Wrote:  Good one, shem, it could almost be a metaphor.   Hysterical

Good to read you Smile
yes, metaphor, that's the ticket.

and to be sure, you are reading a year younger me, before i stopped writing. stumbled upon it by accident, and it made me laugh, so.

(03-13-2016, 11:54 AM)Achebe Wrote:  Martin Amiss would be proud. This is too good to waste on a short poem. It deserves a full length book.
oh, thank you. i haven't read any martin amiss, but i will, nonetheless, take it as a compliment.
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Shut - by shemthepenman - 03-13-2016, 11:33 AM
RE: Shut - by ellajam - 03-13-2016, 11:38 AM
RE: Shut - by shemthepenman - 03-13-2016, 08:58 PM
RE: Shut - by Achebe - 03-13-2016, 11:54 AM
RE: Shut - by Magpie - 03-13-2016, 09:53 PM
RE: Shut - by shemthepenman - 03-14-2016, 04:59 AM
RE: Shut - by bengouma - 04-01-2016, 11:15 PM
RE: Shut - by Erthona - 04-02-2016, 05:31 AM
RE: Shut - by just mercedes - 04-02-2016, 05:42 AM
RE: Shut - by ThePinder - 04-04-2016, 03:55 PM



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