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Jail Routines
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02-18-2016, 09:15 AM
i like the essence of what this poem is the struggle of jail and surviving everyday by writing and i only have one minor gripe about the hello is more than hello for you who didn't know line as it seems a little out of place to me as a casual reader but i feel it could easily be rephrased to sound fine.
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Jail Routines - by Weeded - 01-04-2016, 12:32 PM
RE: Jail Routines - by browtm7 - 01-06-2016, 05:46 AM
RE: Jail Routines - by Weeded - 01-06-2016, 09:32 AM
RE: Jail Routines - by emyleerose - 01-06-2016, 12:35 PM
RE: Jail Routines - by Julius - 01-12-2016, 10:09 PM
RE: Jail Routines - by Tiger the Lion - 01-13-2016, 12:35 AM
RE: Jail Routines - by Erthona - 01-13-2016, 02:49 AM
RE: Jail Routines - by Weeded - 01-26-2016, 04:43 PM
RE: Jail Routines - by RiverNotch - 01-26-2016, 09:40 PM
RE: Jail Routines - by BW BRINE - 01-27-2016, 06:44 AM
RE: Jail Routines - by drivingbothfeetondash - 01-27-2016, 12:13 PM
RE: Jail Routines - by Weeded - 02-13-2016, 01:13 AM
RE: Jail Routines - by Grim - 02-18-2016, 09:15 AM
RE: Jail Routines - by Weeded - 02-18-2016, 08:41 PM
RE: Jail Routines - by mackzmike - 02-22-2016, 06:17 AM
RE: Jail Routines - by Weeded - 02-22-2016, 03:41 PM
RE: Jail Routines - by 1skylande1 - 02-22-2016, 08:05 PM
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