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Gloop (Revision 3.1)
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02-07-2016, 09:05 AM
Love the comments milo, the passive voice comments make a lot of sense. This is still just the bones of an idea at best. I think I need to keep beside on the break for thematic reasons assuming I don't change it all. The fact that the theme isn't popping is another issue. Thank you.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by Todd - 02-04-2016, 04:32 AM
RE: Gloop - by Tiger the Lion - 02-04-2016, 11:24 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Todd - 02-05-2016, 07:48 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Tiger the Lion - 02-07-2016, 05:28 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Todd - 02-07-2016, 06:52 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Leanne - 02-07-2016, 07:12 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Todd - 02-07-2016, 07:16 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision 2) - by Todd - 02-07-2016, 07:43 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision 2) - by milo - 02-07-2016, 08:59 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision 2) - by Todd - 02-07-2016, 09:05 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Todd - 02-09-2016, 08:49 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Weeded - 02-09-2016, 11:27 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Todd - 02-11-2016, 06:40 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Brujo - 02-09-2016, 12:31 PM
RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Todd - 02-11-2016, 06:42 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by RiverNotch - 02-11-2016, 02:28 PM
RE: Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by Todd - 02-12-2016, 12:06 AM
RE: Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by cidermaid - 02-11-2016, 05:47 PM
RE: Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by Todd - 02-12-2016, 12:34 AM
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