Gloop (Revision 3.1)

Gloop (Revision 3.1)

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02-07-2016, 06:52 AM

Hey Paul, I sort of liked it too. I was just seeing if something more concrete would help. I wasn't sure if I could totally the abstract word in the last line--maybe I can, but I still have mixed feelings on it.

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Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by Todd - 02-04-2016, 04:32 AM

RE: Gloop - by Brujo - 02-04-2016, 09:58 AM

RE: Gloop - by Todd - 02-05-2016, 07:18 AM

RE: Gloop - by Tiger the Lion - 02-04-2016, 11:24 AM

RE: Gloop - by Todd - 02-05-2016, 07:21 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Todd - 02-05-2016, 07:48 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Tiger the Lion - 02-07-2016, 05:28 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Todd - 02-07-2016, 06:52 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Leanne - 02-07-2016, 07:12 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision) - by Todd - 02-07-2016, 07:16 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision 2) - by Todd - 02-07-2016, 07:43 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision 2) - by milo - 02-07-2016, 08:59 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision 2) - by Todd - 02-07-2016, 09:05 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Todd - 02-09-2016, 08:49 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Weeded - 02-09-2016, 11:27 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Todd - 02-11-2016, 06:40 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Brujo - 02-09-2016, 12:31 PM

RE: Gloop (Revision 3) - by Todd - 02-11-2016, 06:42 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by RiverNotch - 02-11-2016, 02:28 PM

RE: Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by Todd - 02-12-2016, 12:06 AM

RE: Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by cidermaid - 02-11-2016, 05:47 PM

RE: Gloop (Revision 3.1) - by Todd - 02-12-2016, 12:34 AM

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