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Campus cold: Edit 2
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02-04-2016, 01:57 AM
Thanks for all the help, guys. I've posted an edit in the OP - take a look and let me know what you think. I'm not sure if it's done quite yet, but this helps substantially, I think.
Specifically, adding one more stanza between the second and third might fill it out completely, and tell a complete story. -BW |
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Campus cold: Edit 2 - by BW BRINE - 01-22-2016, 03:53 AM
RE: Campus cold - by rowens - 01-22-2016, 04:35 AM
RE: Campus cold - by Achebe - 01-22-2016, 06:45 AM
RE: Campus cold - by kkieran - 01-22-2016, 07:40 AM
RE: Campus cold - by Julius - 01-23-2016, 05:51 AM
RE: Campus cold - by BW BRINE - 01-27-2016, 06:49 AM
RE: Campus cold - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 01-27-2016, 11:39 AM
RE: Campus cold - by slecht - 02-01-2016, 10:44 AM
RE: Campus cold - by BW BRINE - 02-04-2016, 01:57 AM
RE: Campus cold - by Erthona - 02-04-2016, 02:35 AM
RE: Campus cold - by BW BRINE - 02-04-2016, 08:28 AM
RE: Campus cold - by Erthona - 02-04-2016, 11:34 AM
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