02-03-2016, 03:07 PM
I know every choice on typography and such has an effect on the poem, but the all-caps is really not meant to be taken as anything -- I only put it there to distinguish it from everything else without having to use resizing codes (too fidgety), bolds (might mix up with future comments), and with making it coherent with most everything else I've posted here (at least lately), and with some of the anthologies of other poets I've been reading. I could choose not to repost the title, of course, but in my experience, that tends to make it easy to forget, which can make everything all woozy.
Good point on the tolling. I'll change that.
And I just realized how streamy I've been: potter's yard sure as hell sounds better, but potter's field is what I meant.
The inverting element is with the waiting objects, but I'll change the poem up to practically remove it, anyway.
I'll try and have the next edit up tonight And so it is.
Good point on the tolling. I'll change that.
And I just realized how streamy I've been: potter's yard sure as hell sounds better, but potter's field is what I meant.
The inverting element is with the waiting objects, but I'll change the poem up to practically remove it, anyway.
I'll try and have the next edit up tonight And so it is.