01-31-2016, 03:11 AM
"except maybe" -- you mean "no wait, they're not disagreements, just agreements in bad emotional timing", right? Clownfish live inside me. But a brief return:
I still can't wrap my head around the symbols, but, and I'm sure this is true for 75% of all ears, the feet on your suggested line are:
iamb iamb trochee trochee iamb
That break in the middle with the two stresses clashing sort of makes the end of the line (and so the poem) weaker, but to my inexperienced cochleas it's excusable.
I still can't wrap my head around the symbols, but, and I'm sure this is true for 75% of all ears, the feet on your suggested line are:
iamb iamb trochee trochee iamb
That break in the middle with the two stresses clashing sort of makes the end of the line (and so the poem) weaker, but to my inexperienced cochleas it's excusable.