01-30-2016, 08:21 AM
I feel like I've been picking on everyone without posting anything original lately....so be kind when i finally do get a chance.
I don't like your new format, maybe it's just me but it's hard to read and there's no punctuation so it reads like a run on sentence. I am having trouble understanding what some of the modifiers are attached to.
Swallowing a rippling filter is lost on me, as is sweat presumably under water
I don't like your new format, maybe it's just me but it's hard to read and there's no punctuation so it reads like a run on sentence. I am having trouble understanding what some of the modifiers are attached to.
Swallowing a rippling filter is lost on me, as is sweat presumably under water